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October 4th, 2014, 4:09 am

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Reply PrinceYapi, October 4th, 2014, 4:17 am

there there, don't be ashamed. u can go far, kid. //pets Adam

Honestly Adam isn't my first character with dyslexia. But he's the first one to let it limit himself, I guess?

Also 22 fans, wow. Where do you guys come from and what do you want from a loser like me? Do you have a nest somewhere near? HA.

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Reply Puppet-Mother, October 4th, 2014, 3:14 pm

I love how you added words as if this was a story plus the comic itself
i really like this :o

Reply TURENIA, October 8th, 2014, 2:02 pm

Your art. *drools*

Reply risenfromhell, October 11th, 2014, 12:28 am

Adam looks almost identical to my older bribery

Reply M-24, October 11th, 2014, 2:42 am

Your art is so nice heheh *^*

Reply Jashi, October 14th, 2014, 7:49 am

hmm I think it's gonna be interesting comic :)
I like your drawning style, so it's nice to read the comic :)
But more drawning, less writing, like it is a book, ok? ;)

Reply PrinceYapi, October 14th, 2014, 11:06 am

@Jashi: Thanks, and no. B)

Reply TRUTHORDARE, October 15th, 2014, 2:37 am

Agreed. I enjoy your comic/novel style. Mostly because I read a lot of novels too, and this way the reader gets an extra insight into what the characters are thinking while talking. It's a brilliant effect... well done.

I'd only suggest though that you seriously use a better font for the text. Or at least different fonts for 'speech text' and 'narrative text'. It looks like you're using Times New Roman for all - which dulls the page incredibly. It's still a comic afterall, so artistic details even down to the font is important, imho. But hey, you're the author so you'll decide what's best. That's just my 2 cents from a reader's perspective ^_^

Reply Jashi, October 15th, 2014, 7:59 am

It's ofcourse authors choice, but I just disagree :)
When I read a book it's a book, and comic is a comic, in which I like to find out everything by movements, watching their faces.
Because as I read the description of what is happening currently, it is as if the author didn't want to draw more.

I love books, but I don't expect them to be a comic, and the other way, comic isn't a book.

It's not like I hate it or something, just a little splinter when I read it ;)

Sorry, if I wrote something unclear, or confusing, my english it's not very good >.<

Reply TRUTHORDARE, October 15th, 2014, 12:30 pm

No need to apologize for having your own opinion as you're fully entitled to it. That's a belief I feel strongly about. I just happen to agree with this combined style for the reasons I gave above. The author of another comic I read called "Best Friends Forever" use the same technique now after doing the 'full comic' way for years, and I've found it more enjoyable to read too. This not a right/wrong issue, it's just a matter of perspective. I'm sure there are many other readers out there that disagree with this kind of combination. But I think we all understand that no matter what we say or think, the author(s) are the ones who decide the direction of their work.

Besides, I've seen that we've agreed on topics before (Teahouse *wink, wink*) but it's cool if our perspectives differ here and there ;)

p.s. Your English is awesome ^_^

Reply EProspit, October 25th, 2014, 11:47 pm

Ah hail tha prince
you have quite a good comic on ur hands.
take ur time brah~
((lol I'm being weird today, but meh))

Reply Pandahero1999, October 26th, 2014, 7:37 pm

I love the way the comic is formatted :0 ive never seen it this way before and I love how unique it is. Im eager for the update :D!!

Reply Mineral, October 31st, 2014, 12:43 am

I really like the half text half graphics. I also really love the character designs.

Definitely look forward to future pages!

Reply magicmau5, November 16th, 2014, 1:18 am

It's a weird this to say...that blush was sexy as hell.

Reply Mase42sam2, November 18th, 2014, 3:06 pm

hi Interesting... I like to see read more? When is update?

Reply Icecreamer, November 29th, 2014, 11:35 pm

please update!!! this is so awesome!!! i shall ship them now. <3

Reply Vindictive bassoon, February 8th, 2015, 5:49 am

I have dyslexia. It really does discourage you as a kid. It's embarrassing to stumble over easy words when you have to read out loud in class...
I didn't find out I actually had it till college. There really should be some kind of test to find it out early on. I could have gotten dyslexia font books and been much more confident in english class. Adam, I feel you bro.

Reply Icecreamer, April 26th, 2015, 1:19 am

I can't back down now. this pair is just so adorbs and now i shall add it to my armada of ships.
\(^ v ^)/

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